tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27410053.post3358681185789171592..comments2023-02-26T14:09:19.807+05:30Comments on Poetic Experimentation: SaviourImperfecthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00570671820738364056noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27410053.post-11838045310773569462007-02-26T13:16:00.000+05:302007-02-26T13:16:00.000+05:30@l.rknwell i put this heading because to me, the e...@l.rkn<BR/>well i put this heading because to me, the essence of the poem was that the guy came back to her, and despite everything she was ok. so he is her saviour<BR/><BR/>i dont wanna publish right now :) thanks though<BR/><BR/>well she doesnt die, one assumes he takes her to the hospital and the next scene is years later when she's sitting in the park...Imperfecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00570671820738364056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27410053.post-47750655951450489702007-02-24T12:53:00.000+05:302007-02-24T12:53:00.000+05:30i mean, she dies at the end rite? so how does he s...i mean, she dies at the end rite? so how does he save her? and btw<BR/><BR/>"her holds her at once"<BR/><BR/>shuld be<BR/><BR/>" he holds her at once"<BR/><BR/>yeah, i read the whole thing. lol<BR/><BR/>~ L. RknAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27410053.post-85607353831411173372007-02-24T12:50:00.000+05:302007-02-24T12:50:00.000+05:30Its good, but ur headings dont exactly match ur po...Its good, but ur headings dont exactly match ur poems. MAybe u shulde work on those. And try n divide the poem into stanzas according to topic, specially when its so long. Easier on the eye. If ur interested in gettin em published or something, i know a guy on win live whose dad works in that business, i can ask him. Hes the guy who published my game long ago...... U shuld also submit this stuff to search engines n things. <BR/><BR/>THat is if ur interested..... is the one abt urmila miss in here?<BR/><BR/><BR/>~ L. Rkn <BR/><BR/>u kno who i amAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com